Grateful to have the following haiku chosen for commentary by Richard Matta:
a wild sky
tethered to earth . . .
chain lightning
Gnarled Oak, Issue 1, December 2014
Richard's Commentary:
"Having lived in Florida I know lightning and can relate to the wildness of the sky. The assonance in tethered and earth is wonderful, and the use of tethered and wild certainly makes one think of a wild monster with which you might try to use a chain."
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