Translated into Chinese by Chen-ou Liu:
refugee train
small hands starfished
against the glass
1st Place, 2024 Triveni Awards
Chen-ou Liu's Comments:
The haiku places a heavy, geopolitical subject ("refugee train," L1) against a fragile, personal one ("small hands," L2). this contrast—the massive, moving machine versus the stationary, tiny hands—is a classic haiku technique for creating depth.
The verb, "starfished," is the emotional anchor of the haiku. It creates a stark, physical image of small fingers spread wide, suggesting vulnerability, a search for stability, or a desperate attempt to connect with the world passing by.
And the glass in L3 acts effectively as both a literal and figurative barrier. It highlights the "othering" of the refugee experience—the children are visible to the world, yet physically separated from safety or a permanent home.
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