Saturday, April 23, 2016

NeverEnding Story, April 2016

Translated into Chinese by Chen-ou Liu

f i s s u r e s
and (whose) fault lines
cracking open
we try to mend the damage
of our quaking lives

Undertow Tanka Review 1, August 2014

Chen-ou's comments:

Combined with the effective use of space placement and (), the prefatory image is logically metaphoric or at least resonates closely with the emotional point of the poem.

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